I find the CSA definition embedded in the first paragraph breaks the flow. Why not move it to a glossary. In the real book you could put the glossary at the end of the book but for now I just put it to the bottom of the page to test out readability: --[[User:EricSaumur|EricSaumur]] 04:38, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
: Great idea! I've updated the preface. --[[User:Brandon CS Sanders|Brandon]] 04:47, 1 March 2012 (UTC)